Things that needed to be improved - Feedback received 19/10/11
- Make it the father's/husband's birthday to make it more empathetical.
- The child goes into an imaginary world when faced with the harshness of reality and ordinary life - to deal with the trauma she escapes into an imaginary world, hence why she doesn't understand why her mother is getting upset, etc.
- The mother can only take so much so aggressively snaps at the daughter.
